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rebels.

i. you called me last night a poem on the edges of your lips something you wanted to press against me like an imprint. it was a poem about a monster and a small girl screaming for help but no-one knew whether she was calling to on the behalf or because of the monster. you said, softly and solemnly that you'd never considered so many possibilities. i laughed and said i believed in all three isn't that a contradiction, you asked, and i just held the phone silently wanting to scream out a no but not daring. ii. the next day my parents sit me down at the dinner table to discuss my future. do i want to be a mathematician or a poet? they leave t

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Temperance in the Reversed

Abigail Wash had seen the mafia push a beat-up Model T into the lake. And she had told the town about it for five days. It wasn’t that they didn’t believe her; it was that they didn’t know what she wanted them to do about it. She would insist on pulling the car from the lake and her daddy said he only needed a few good men to help with the wrenching. But no few good men wanted to know what the mafia didn’t want them to know. Men cut from a less moral cloth told Abigail to keep silent. And after those five days, she fell silent on the topic of the car. Although for the next six years until her daddy lost the house she

DDs or DLRS

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Literature

Temperance in the Reversed

Abigail Wash had seen the mafia push a beat-up Model T into the lake. And she had told the town about it for five days. It wasn’t that they didn’t believe her; it was that they didn’t know what she wanted them to do about it. She would insist on pulling the car from the lake and her daddy said he only needed a few good men to help with the wrenching. But no few good men wanted to know what the mafia didn’t want them to know. Men cut from a less moral cloth told Abigail to keep silent. And after those five days, she fell silent on the topic of the car. Although for the next six years until her daddy lost the house she

Suggested DLRs, DDs

39 deviations
Literature

untitled #39

picture a lion a bird in its mouth, you—                                                                                 brave heart. trying to pretend your teeth aren’t sharp (enough to kill me). picture a bird in a lion’s mouth, hoping for mercy, waiting for a promise, wishing to be a cat                                                                                 to claw its way out. you saw my shadow mistook it for a giant and then, in your arms, i became the saddest girl                                                                                 alive.

2019

49 deviations
Literature

aries in the first house.

call me tigress of wicked tongue, starving since the day i was born.    [ i was named for a goddess, the mother of suns. ] give me ram-horned athenian girls who kiss with pride clenched between their teeth. give me white seraphim warriors, their touch like napalm, burning and burning.    [ i die fearlessly, like sunset, like phoenix. ] give me blood and entrails and dark fire-glass knives. cut me your beating heart, spill your life on my temple floors.    [ i am the volcano and i demand sacrifice. ]

2018

63 deviations
Literature

Read Me

Book worm squirm against the pressed flowers of my pages where my torn out table of contents spilled ink between the lines Leaf through my open spoken words Make a fold to highlight insights you like Take notes on my margins with your red pen Foreshadowed heavy editing fixes in syntax Write me a climax

2017

40 deviations
Literature

Things My Father Taught Me

The smooth and white kind of birch bark is good for making campfires on cold and rainy autumn days. It makes an excellent kindling and will take flame even when wet. Bacon and mustard sandwiches toasted over that campfire are the most delicious things you can cook when you're hunting or fishing out in the woods. And when you make campfire coffee, put the instant coffee, sugar, and powdered creamer in the cup first, then pour the boiling water over; this is especially good when you don't have a spoon to stir the coffee. That was an old trick he learned from eating c-rations during the war. All these years later I still do the coffee tri

2016

96 deviations
Literature

Lacrimosa

She breaks harp strings She tells me, in a hour Or less She has a backbone Stronger than anything I've ever seen She breaks harp strings She tells me, with delicate fingers And violent heart Loved by a ribcage More fragile than Her fluttering start She is orchideliruim She is lemon vodka, peppermint tea Cold champagne spiked with Paradise, Like the things she used to make for me She writes nocturnes in her sleep And she cuts But she can't let them see She's a butterfly Breaking at the wings She is gilt and guilt and Gold-tone trills, brilliant She tells me she breaks harp strings And we'll play the piano one day I talk to her late at

2015

139 deviations
Literature

crooked blue lines

i took a photo of my face and saved it in a document i changed the file from .JPG to .txt i wrote I DON'T NEED YOU TO LIKE ME into the body of the text of my face until my face disappeared i am thinking about the summer when i bought large bags of chips and hid them around the house i didn't let myself eat them but i wanted to own them so no one else could eat them either i had a feeling of not wanting to sleep again and experienced migraines in two different countries i threw up in a club and then passed out on the floor the floor was very sticky the lights seemed to make the room more dark than if it had been a room without lights i hadn

2014

108 deviations
Literature

We are both foreigners in a house we once shared.

Reacquaint me: your mother died last year; my boyfriend has left. You wring your hands beneath the table, where you think I cannot see. I refuse to care; instead I line up lovers between bites of toast. You've taken to staying out late, I've taken to sleeping early. We exchange carefully chosen words-- the ones clipped of meaning. Reacquaint me: here we are, breathing the same city air, both of us trying to seize our own brands of happiness. Yet what is that but a passing shadow of sun? In the darkening afternoon it illuminates us at our prime. We can no more claim it than we can trap the loves of our lives to our side. Reacq

pre-2014

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Bamboo Brook

Artworks

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Spiritual State

Fandoms etc.

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david fucking strider

Homestuck

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Tiger

Photography etc.

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Features

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Tag from comatose-comet

Thoughtfully tagged by ~comatose-comet (https://www.deviantart.com/comatose-comet), then us begin! The Questions: i. favourite word in another language? Right now at this very moment it is the Finnish word for 'rainbow', which is 'Sateenkaari'. ii. any embarrassing misconceptions/misunderstandings you had as a child? None that I can remember.....lucky me. iii. what's a word/theme/colour etc you feel you overuse in your work? For my writing, the word "the" and "and" . As far as theme's go, I would say "fantasy" for both my drawing and writing. Color that I overuse would be gray I think. Lots of pencil work, I can't help it. =P iv. what's your favourite piece in your own gal

Other things

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