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Coffin lid discarded

She woke,

For the contest at SixWordStories: Turning paranormal
I wanted to give the idea that she (a vampire) was a corpse in her coffin in the day but at night she'd rise from the dead, hungry and ready to hunt. But that's a lot to get across in 6 words!

Edit: contest finished
V is for Vampire
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This has been featured in my journal.  :heart:

V is for VampireVampires.  I like em.
Hope you do too.

comatose-comet Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
segura2112 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Good story, I think I need to start reading Laurell K. Hamilton's Anita Blake series again. Thank You
comatose-comet Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem :heart: and thank you for your lovely comment :hug:
AlphaManifest Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dementia correlates with Bloodied lips, bloodless body

It's a noun.


de·men·tia [dih-men-shuh, -shee-uh]


...loss of intellectual capacity and personality integration...

If the lid is discarded, we can be referenced to believe that she has lost her mind and her capability to comprehend or to become worthless; offering herself to be torn, she is clinically insane. Then we are subject to believe that she is laid in a decrypt coffin, however, I believe the coffin is in reference to her body. 

She is programmed...

From being shrouded with insanity, she has lost self worth. Being clinically unbalanced, she lusts in hunger...and is ravenous for under--standing; Why she has become lost...

However, her under...standing is in reference to her awakening. 

Under herself, she is omnivorous, and ferocious while devouring what's left of her principal and morality.
Standing, she's indeed lost and craves aesthetic vanity instead of becoming found.

le Manifest 
prettyflour Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome job.  Good luck in the contest.
comatose-comet Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :love:
comatose-comet Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad the story came across yay!kaomoji set 2 18/67 I like the space too, and I don't know why I like it either haha!
You are so lovely aaaah it's not awkward you are amazing and it is ridiculously flattering whenever you comment or like something I've done kaomoji set 2 67/67 
(literally, whenever I see your name come up in my notifications I'm like Frozen - Olaf's Happy Icon
LadyBitterblue Featured By Owner May 7, 2014   Writer
Oh you flatter me  cute blush I honestly don't know what to say... but if my recognition helps motivate you to keep submitting on dA, everything's fine (see, I'm really just tricking you into giving me more of your great writingEbil Laugh
comatose-comet Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:love: you are brilliant motivation! Can't Breathe 
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